Feedback:
- Fill in blanks
- Develop a new opening sequence
- Add in credits, e.g. director, producer, actors, etc.
- Re-shoot some of the dark shots, make the faces clearer
- Extend the shot of the protagonist walking towards antagonist
- Neaten the shot of Brighton Pier (starts to pan at the end)
- Maybe re-film the shot of the antagonist in the background
- Film water running, layer over last shot and layer title over top of that (white text)
- Bulk up the overall trailer, minimum: 1 minute 20 long
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